J.A. Belfield

Gonna keep this one short and sweet to match the story.

I really enjoyed Untouched, but I often enjoy reading a story written from the male’s perspective after being introduced to them through the female’s eyes.

Kale’s just … adorable. But whilst his naivety still got reflected very well through his dialogue—fewer contractions/no slang—I felt that wasn’t carried across to the narration quite so well. And I felt that it should have for it to stay authentic to Kale’s voice. Other than that though, I thought it was a great little filler that allowed me a piece of Kale.